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Unwell

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He hasn’t been feeling very well recently.
He doesn’t care.
He’s different.
I don’t understand.

He ignores me a lot.
The only times he laughs,
It’s so unlike him it scares me.
I want to know what’s happened.

I don’t understand.
What’s happened to you?
My dear, Prince Edward.
Well, because we spoke about poems in Language Arts today, and we had to write one, I'm able to write poems. When we talk about them in class, I can normally write good ones for a few days afterward, they're harder for me then stories, and I get ideas for them less.
By the way, I love the poem I wrote for class, so I am putting that up after I type it. I got the idea for that right after the first time we talked about poems, but I never wrote it down. Now I had the perfect excuse to!
Anyway, this is for ReincarnatedParano It is based off of his character Edward. It's from Joseph's point of view. I'm not sure if it's very good or accurate, but I got the idea, so I decided I might as well write it and put it up. I love Serai, everyone who sees this should go to ReincarnatedParano's profile and adore his artwork and story.
Also, anyone who has seen [link] will understand the first line.
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ParaParano's avatar
Oh, wow. This was such a surprise. XD! In a good way!

Ahh, I can understand, it must be difficult writing for something that hasn't happened yet, but... There's some surprising accuracy here!

It's... It's so sweet. <3 I love how you've portrayed Joseph's concern for Edward, and how you've described his mental state. Also, extra points for that first line. XD!!

Thank you so much. <3 I really enjoyed this. ;w;

(I'm actually a girl. <3)